Draft Feedback

I've shown two people some of my footage to see how they felt about how smooth some of the cuts were and whether they needed changing. Both people felt that the cuts were much too fast so I have changed them to look more fluent. This was during editing before I considered it a first draft.

Documentary Audio Enhancment

I have gone through all of my audio clips and used the 'Auto Enhance Audio' option on all of my clips which has removed lots of background noise and vastly improved the quality of the audio. 

Tie Frame

I felt like the Tie Frame was an essential piece of the set because it shows that Sam's ties mean to him as a character and that he wants to keep them pristine. The fact that he has ties that he doesn't even wear shows that he has too many ties.


When me and Sam created the tie frame we placed the ties in a way which we felt was appropriate with  specific ties which have been seen on his youtube channel and some others.

 

When we placed the backing on the frame the ties didn't stay in place so we decided that we needed to use tape to keep the ties in place

We used a green tape to retain the shape of the tie and keep a similar length. We also decided to make them face different ways because it looked better and more organised.

This is how it looked when it was finished and all ties stayed secure.

We put the frame on the wall and although they stared to bow we felt like it would be appropriate due to his relatively untidy character. 

Radio Advert Codes and Conventions

• Radio Adverts will typically just feature some audio taken from the product 
• There is also typically music that relates to the advert but I don't know what I could use for this so I may end up using some unrelated music
• Radio adverts are typically not longer than 30 seconds.
• The details (Dates, Time, etc) need to be given in the advert

Logo Draft 2

I made a second logo draft because I wanted to experiment with a down arrow in the tie typography because the title is 'Sam Tied Down'. I feel like keeping the word 'Down' on the left side because it seems more clean. I can use this in my newspaper advert and in my documentary.

Filming Plan

I plan to film at least the first minute of my documentary opening over this weekend. This should include everything I have made as a draft and some more which I have planned on my storyboard and script. I will also do a photoshoot for my newspaper advert ancillary task. I will also probably make a rough draft for my radio advert script and try to find people who have an appropriate voice and are willing to be the interviewer for my radio advert.

Radio Advert Software and Hardware